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(A deep look at some top tweets, and why they work so darn well)

Todd Brison
Mar 6
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Every once in a while, the disgruntled friend or frustrated client (who is undoubtedly upset with me because I made them revisit chapter 10… again) will say something like the following:

“People just don’t have attention spans any more. They don’t read as much. They’re stuck on their Tweets and Instagram and TikTok.”

This is, of course, a perfect cocktail of cognitive biases. Start with equal parts generational bias and “good old days” bias. Add a splash of illusory superiority. Shake until frothing (mad).

While it’s not unusual to gripe about the kids, it’s particularly hilarious to assume low-attention span writing is a new thing.

Consider Hemingway’s 6-word stories. Consider the haiku. Consider poetry in general, for that matter. If Shakespeare were alive today, he’d be an Instagram caption champion. Fitzgerald would be penning dynamite headlines on Business Insider. Jane Austen would be Elyse Myers on TikTok, spinning dynamic stories to captivate audiences.

And all the poets would be killing it on Twitter.

Despite its reputation for ignorant comments and raw fury (and there is plenty there), Twitter is home to some of the most exquisite sentences published.

When I’m bored and it’s rainy outside, I go to Twitter for comfort. This normal habit turned nerdy when I began to analyze and annotate some of the better tweets that cross my path.

Let’s take look at a few.


Parallel structure on Twitter

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Also, notice the IMPERFECT parallel structure in the second line "A little pessimistic" As opposed to: "pessimistic." Morgan stands out as a writer because he's putting accuracy over form.
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Getting rich: Optimism, risk-taking, swing for the fences. Staying rich: A little pessimistic, skeptical, room for error.
10:00 PM ∙ Oct 4, 2022

Parallel structure (a sentence or phrase with matching length and sentence type) reigns supreme on Twitter.

Usually, that parallel structure deploys juxtaposition as well, directly comparing two ideas, usually to show some sort of hypocrisy or irony.

Like so:

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Want to make someone look dumb? Use irony.
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Citizens for Ethics @CREWcrew
Marco Rubio: I paid off my student debt by writing a book Also Marco Rubio: I used to political donor funds to pay someone to write a book for me
10:00 PM ∙ Aug 29, 2022

It can also be used in a less sassy way. You can roll out the old parallel structure + juxtaposition to drive action, not anger.

Like so:

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@robreiner (Why your brain loves this tweet)
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1:35 PM ∙ Sep 12, 2022

Repetition in tweets

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btw this is called an "epistrophe"
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"Success is doing what you want, when you want, where you want, with whom you want, as much as you want."
10:00 PM ∙ Sep 15, 2022

Remember: repetition helps you remember.

Here, repetition is deployed as an epistrophe (repeating a word or phrase at the END of a sentence or phrase.)

Epistrophe’s sister is the anaphora - repeating a word or phrase at the BEGINNING.

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For those interested... This is called "anaphora." (And it's pretty much irresistable) https://t.co/D02FfZ3DTu
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September will be filled with happiness September will be filled with blessings September will be filled with positivity September will be filled with progress September will be filled with kindness September will be filled with love September will be filled with opportunity.
1:45 PM ∙ Aug 25, 2022

Symmetry on Twitter

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Chiasmus: the lifeblood of political rhetoric and Twitter
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GREG ISENBERG @gregisenberg
You can't find ideas. Ideas find you.
1:45 PM ∙ Sep 6, 2022

Think this is trite, do you?

Might I remind you of a certain American president, who claimed that we should not “ask what our country can do for us” but instead “ask what we can do for our country.”

Chiasmus is a symmetrical flip of words. It’s hard to do. It’s dumb when you get it wrong.

But boy, is it effective when you get it right.

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What @shl is doing here is called a "chiasmus" It's symmetrical structure (Think: "ask not what what you country can do for you..."
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Sahil Lavingia @shl
Too many people think degree first, career second, life third. Think life first, career second, degree third.
10:00 PM ∙ Aug 9, 2022

Sarcasm on Twitter

The “sassy takedown” is not new to the written word. Given a second chance at life and a Twitter account, Oscar Wilde would eviscerate everyone.

(For my lit nerds who feel the need to classify sarcasm as a form of irony, do so.)

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Why this tweet works (Not mentioned: Anaphora. Syllable Rhythm. Rhyme.)
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Cindy is barely on this hellsite @readwithcindy
I'm not writing my novel for you. I'm not even writing it for me. I'm writing for Lea Michele. So she can learn how to read
1:53 PM ∙ Sep 7, 2022
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@jacasiegel (Here's why your brain loves this tweet)
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8:39 PM ∙ Aug 2, 2022

Twitter’s future

While we’re on the topic of hypocrisy, anger, and sarcasm, it’s natural to bring up Twitter’s current owner, and the controversy surrounding him.

Elon is a polarizing figure. I get that.

If you can sort through the chaos, the wild tweets, and the 420 memes, though, it’s possible to see positive changes to the platform.

In fact, Twitter might soon be the BEST place for writers to be.

I don’t have all the details here.

Luckily, I work with someone who does.

My friend Tim Denning is leading a free workshop this Thursday called “How to Leverage the Twitter Revolution and Build an Audience in 90 days or Less.”

If you’ve ever thought about building an audience on Twitter, or if you just want to get your writing in front of more people, you’ll get a lot out of this session.

You can grab a seat by clicking this link.

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